My 4th

[cristina]

My confidence is utterly dry so I could use some help xD My bad. The excerpts will probably be no bigger than a paragraph.

For those that don't know, my 4th is about a fragile kid that encounters a hollow entity called 'the promise of voice' or 'the one that speaks' and goes through endless trials in an attempt to grasp what exactly she is.

[TobiIsAGoodBoy]

ANGST!

...sorry, it was just a feeling...

[cristina]

lol I don't know why this kid bothers with life. I would've off'ed myself so fast, no joke. I practically obliterate any common happiness normally granted to the average life by the end xD

Here's excerpt 1 (This is a scene between the characters Amadeus and Kingston, occuring after Kingston first confesses to the burden he holds, her name to be exact) :

“Oh? How wonderful… How does it feel to be her keeper, Hawthorn? Is it humbling, to contain such a goddess? Can you feel her rotting you from the inside?” Amadeus’s lips curled from his mirth laced words, tongue slick and snickering. Kingston’s eyes spanned eminently wide, jowls locked, and the discomfort prior decimated by immense start and fright. The light devouring Amadeus’s irises flickered, then, suddenly, the malignant properties of his aura faltered. Amadeus relapsed, regressing to his pacific state with neither warning nor notable dissipation. The corruption once in his smile revoked and grueling eyes shut away as he grinned benevolently, politely, any venality completely extinguished.

[TobiIsAGoodBoy]

...dang.

Now I'm intrigued.

[Joanna]

LITTLE BOYS AND CAAAAAAANDAY!!!!! XD

[mikemorris8]

I like it. I've almost no idea what's going on in it but the it does reveal a lot about the plot which, from what I understood of it, is a really good. I say go ahead full steam.